This is the third post in the series on website content mistakes you can avoid so that you don’t end up annoyed with your website like our friend here. Use this link to see all the posts in this series: Real Estate Website Content Mistakes.
The first two posts in this series covered issues related to how your website is set up, and some issues related to Search Engine Optimization (SEO). Now, we’re up to mistake #8.
8. Not Optimizing Your Pages for Your Chosen Keyword Phrases
This is a mistake I see a lot. I am always amazed at the capabilities search engines have. They send their spiders to crawl all over the Internet reading individual websites. The magnitude of that task is almost beyond my ability to grasp the concept. The fact that they keep all that information straight is truly incredible. However, search engines are just machines and haven’t gotten to the point of reading our minds. Yet.
But, it often seems like we do expect the engines to read our minds. A typical situation is when I’m talking to a prospective client about doing some customization for their site. While we talk, I usually take a quick trip to their site to see what is already in place. I might find a community page, let’s say it’s about the town of Smallville. I look at the page title and meta tags, and they focus on Smallville real estate. So far, so good.
Then, I do a quick scan of the page content and discover that the words Smallville real estate do not appear anywhere on the page. It’s true that content for your website should be written for human beings, not search engines. But, you shouldn’t ignore the engines altogether. Just make sure to keep your keyword phrases in mind as you write.
Here are some examples:
|
Target Phrase
|
Poor SEO |
Good SEO |
| Smallville real estate |
If you want a home in the Smallville area, you’ll find a lot to choose from. |
If you are looking for Smallville real estate, you’ll find a lot to choose from. |
| relocating to Smallville |
If your job is bringing you to Smallville, you’ll find a lot of information here to help make your move easier. |
If you’re relocating to Smallville you’ll find a lot of information here to help make your move easier. |
| Smallville schools |
All the public schools in Smallville are part of the Anderson County Board of Education. |
The Anderson County Board of Education operates all the public Smallville schools. |
It’s a good idea to have your target phrase appear at least at the top of the page, and at the bottom. If you can easily include it another time or two, that’s even better. And, putting the phrase in bold type will help your visitors scan the page, and the search engines will notice that, too.
One easy way to make sure your target phrase appears at the bottom of the page is to add a summary paragraph. It could be something as simple as “If you have any questions about Smallville real estate…” or “If I can help make relocating to Smallville a pleasant experience for you and your family….” or “If you have school age children, you’ll be pleased with the outstanding educational opportunities you’ll find in the Smallville schools.”
9. Leaving Your Internet Visitors Out in the Cold
This is an easy one to miss. You know that you need to tell your Internet visitors what you can do for them. But, the “point of view” you use in the writing is important. It’s the difference between drawing your visitors into your world, and keeping them as distant observers.
You undoubtedly learned this in school sometime, but here’s a brief review of Point of View in writing:
- First Person – From the point of view of the writer(s), using pronouns like I, my, us, we
- Second Person – From the point of view of the reader, using pronouns like you and your
- Third Person – From an outside point of view, using pronouns like they, theirs
Wherever possible, writing from the point of view of the reader draws them into what is being said and helps to establish a personal relationship between you and your Internet visitors. It’s easy, though to fall into writing in first person.
When you write for the web, you might want to write a first draft just to get the information down in a logical way. Then, go back over the content to make sure that it’s written in second person. Here’s an example of how that might go:
- First draft: We provide all the tools that are required to research a home purchase in Smallville. The mortage calculator can be used to determine the affordability of a home. We make sure that all the necessary financial information is available to make an informed decision.
- Revision: You’ll find all the tools you need to research your next home purchase in Smallville right on this website! You can use the mortgage calculator to determine how much home you can afford. We know how important it is for you to protect your financial future, so we make sure you have all the financial information you need to make an informed decision.
If you want to check your web pages, there’s a handy free online tool called the Customer Focus Calculator. Test some of your pages with the calculator. It will tell you exactly how customer-focused the content of the page is, and whether you need to go back and do some revising!